Until someone pointed it out to me, I didn't realize how many times I say, or write that - and that's a problem, especially when you're trying to get your novels published.
That one little word can make a huge difference to a potential agent or editor. If they see the word too many times they might get annoyed enough to throw your manuscript out the window, never taking the time to know if the story is really good or not. I don't blame them. There are times I'm re-reading a scene only to find out every sentence has a that in it.
I'll admit, I've given that an enormous amount of power.
But I am not alone.
From what I hear, a lot of writers - both published and non - have the same problem. Many are not as lucky as I am to have published friends who have editors to teach and correct them, or to have such a great critique partner as I do who'd never let me get away with looking foolish.
The bigger problem comes when I'm on my own and write without having anyone looking over my shoulder. It then, when I must be on my toes. Much, much more difficult than you think.
It's just such an easy word to insert in place. For example, "I knew that I liked red wine from the very first sip." Here's the thing, you might say that when you're speaking but do you really need it?
Probably not.
Let's see, "I knew I liked red wine from the very first sip." See?!
I consciously try to avoid that, but somehow I just can't break the habit. Ugh!
So I challenge you - next time you sit down and write a letter on your computer or listen to a friend explain something to you, count how many that's come up, then try to figure out how many are actually needed.Have fun with that!
